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Re: Literary Devices
Hi there! I am Esther and I shall be reviewing your pieces today. Interesting idea; telling stories using specific writing devices instead of blending them up. I liked them all. ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Zombie Play [Working Title] Part 1
Hi there! My name is Esther and I shall be reviewing you (two?)today. Nice, interesting play concept. I know there are zombie plays out there but I haven't read any ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: A Night To Remember
This was a short but sweet piece, I enjoyed it. However, if you don't care if we liked it or not, why did you post it on here? This is ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Dance
I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. The first thing I noticed was that your punctuation is somewhat lacking. Normally, I am fine with simple mistakes, but one ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Mother
Hi there! I see that you are new to YWS! Welcome. I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Is this really nonfiction? If it is it certainly sad ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 3, draft)
Hello RO! Nice to see that you got another chapter up! I'm glad that you told me about it or else I probably wouldn't have found it. That would have ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Dead Nyte- Dead Dream (Chap. 1)
Hi there! I'm Esther. Pleased to meet you. So this is your first novel, huh? It's a great undertaking, but it is totally worth it by the end. Let's get ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Broken Crow (Chp. 1, Part 1)
Hey Enigma! Good ole Esther is ready for a rip roarin' review. Well, let me just say that I am a sucker for this kind of story. I already got ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Running for you
Hi there! Esther landing in for a review. This was quite good, really. Here are my comments: You need to proof read this. Before you post something, be sure to ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 2, draft)
Hey there! I'm back for chapter two! So, this was yet another good chapter! Here are some things I am going to point out: PLOT: The interest is still here. ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 1, draft)
Hey there! Gosh, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to your chapters. You don't deserve to wait. I've had a cold lately that wiped me out so ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: One Last Song
Hello there! I will be reviewing you today. Ah, what a refreshing fairy tale. I'm a fairy tale lover myself. (I even posted one just now!) You pulled out the ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Under the skin.
Hello Piano. I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. So, I get the feeling that you are trying to sound poetic and intellegent here. Sometimes you succeed ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: DISCONTINUED.
Hey firefly! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I've had a busy week. This is a very solid story here. I enjoyed it quite a lot. ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: The Stuggles of Antier - Part II
Hey Squirrely! I'm glad to see that you got your second part up. I've been wanting to read it for quite some time now. I liked this better than first ...
Jul 22, 2010
