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Esther Sylvester

  • Other » General, General Re: Literary Devices

    Hi there! I am Esther and I shall be reviewing your pieces today. Interesting idea; telling stories using specific writing devices instead of blending them up. I liked them all. ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Zombie Play [Working Title] Part 1

    Hi there! My name is Esther and I shall be reviewing you (two?)today. Nice, interesting play concept. I know there are zombie plays out there but I haven't read any ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Night To Remember

    This was a short but sweet piece, I enjoyed it. However, if you don't care if we liked it or not, why did you post it on here? This is ...

    Sep 18, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Dance

    I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. The first thing I noticed was that your punctuation is somewhat lacking. Normally, I am fine with simple mistakes, but one ...

    Sep 17, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Mother

    Hi there! I see that you are new to YWS! Welcome. I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Is this really nonfiction? If it is it certainly sad ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 3, draft)

    Hello RO! Nice to see that you got another chapter up! I'm glad that you told me about it or else I probably wouldn't have found it. That would have ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dead Nyte- Dead Dream (Chap. 1)

    Hi there! I'm Esther. Pleased to meet you. So this is your first novel, huh? It's a great undertaking, but it is totally worth it by the end. Let's get ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Broken Crow (Chp. 1, Part 1)

    Hey Enigma! Good ole Esther is ready for a rip roarin' review. Well, let me just say that I am a sucker for this kind of story. I already got ...

    Aug 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Running for you

    Hi there! Esther landing in for a review. This was quite good, really. Here are my comments: You need to proof read this. Before you post something, be sure to ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 2, draft)

    Hey there! I'm back for chapter two! So, this was yet another good chapter! Here are some things I am going to point out: PLOT: The interest is still here. ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 1, draft)

    Hey there! Gosh, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to your chapters. You don't deserve to wait. I've had a cold lately that wiped me out so ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: One Last Song

    Hello there! I will be reviewing you today. Ah, what a refreshing fairy tale. I'm a fairy tale lover myself. (I even posted one just now!) You pulled out the ...

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Under the skin.

    Hello Piano. I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. So, I get the feeling that you are trying to sound poetic and intellegent here. Sometimes you succeed ...

    Aug 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: DISCONTINUED.

    Hey firefly! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I've had a busy week. This is a very solid story here. I enjoyed it quite a lot. ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Stuggles of Antier - Part II

    Hey Squirrely! I'm glad to see that you got your second part up. I've been wanting to read it for quite some time now. I liked this better than first ...

    Jul 22, 2010


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